The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050

Essay topics:

The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.

The pie charts illustrate the proportion of ages of the population in two countries namely Yemen and Italy during a period of 50 years between 2000 and 2050.

Overall, it is clear that the figures in both two countries are predicted to change significantly. In particular, the percentage of (15 – 59)year-old citizens in Yemen is going to increase sharply while that of Italy is prone to a reduction.

In 2000, there were nearly half of citizens were belonged to the 0 – 14 year old group, followed by 46.3% of people from 15 to 59 years old; however, the former is expected to drop to about 37% in 2050 in Yemen while the latter is predicted to experience an increase of 11%. The number of citizens who are over 60 years old has contributed a small proportion of under 5% over the period surveyed.

In terms of Italy, the percentage of people under 15 years old is projected to drop slightly from 14.3% to 11.5% in 2050. Meanwhile, the figure for (15 – 59) year old group is going to witness a fall of 15.4% over 50 years. Finally, the proportion for the elderly stood at 24.1% in 2000 and is predicted to go up significantly to 42.3% in the end.

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Average: 8.9 (15 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, if, while, in particular

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 33.7804878049 148% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 949.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 212.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47641509434 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63798197761 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518867924528 0.547539520022 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 271.8 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.6654858825 43.030603864 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.625 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 22.9334400587 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.875 5.23603664747 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187187641142 0.215688989381 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0850944172034 0.103423049105 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0942920621209 0.0843802449381 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13737001173 0.15604864568 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105979242482 0.0819641961636 129% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.47 61.2550243902 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.0 11.4140731707 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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