The charts below show the growth in the population in some of the world’s largest cities as well as the population distribution in urban and rural areas.
The chart illustrates how the Asian countries had the highest population during the 2010, more than 15 million and less than 30 million. Overall, it is seen that the world population is increasing every year and Tokyo was the only city with the highest population in every period.
Talking about Tokyo, the graph showed that that was the city with the highest population over 15 million in 1970 whereas, in comparison with Jakarta, the population was almost 2.5 million in same year. Then, in 1990, Tokyo was again the number in population of the cities because it had almost 25 million. In contrast, Jakarta almost got less than 10 million of population.
On the other hand, the only American city, New York, with 12.5 habitants, represented more than all the population of Moscow and Paris together (5.3 million each one).
Finally, if it is analyzed the population in rural and urban areas, it is seen that the first one was increasing from 1980 to 2010, meanwhile, the second one was growing up for 1980 to 2010 but, since that year, became decreasing. it was at 2 billion in 1990 which was almost double in 2010 whereas the rural population was steady in its growth and reached to 3.2 billion.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 233, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, second, so, then, whereas, while, in contrast, talking about, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 999.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 209.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77990430622 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43064084685 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2512953194 43.030603864 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.875 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.125 22.9334400587 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0 5.23603664747 248% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211540703166 0.215688989381 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100943557668 0.103423049105 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549617217475 0.0843802449381 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128102621855 0.15604864568 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.047470203501 0.0819641961636 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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