The charts below show information about three different deserts around the world Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main information and making comparisons

The charts above give us a concise summary of 3 biggest hot deserts in the world located in 3 different continents: Africa, Asia and North America.

According to the record, Sahara is the biggest desert on earth which occupies an area of 9,000,000 square kilometers, spreads over 10 countries in Africa - 30 times more than size of Taklimakan and Great Basin Desert.

The average temperatures in these three deserts looks the same like many other places (25-30 in the summer, -8-13 in the winter) but the temperature amplitude swings up to 20 Celsius degree. On scorching days, the heat can be up to 58 Celsius degree at the hottest point and decreased to the lowest at -26.1 Celsius degree.

The rainfall in these deserts is low and diverse from point to point. The average annual rainfall in southern Sahara is 12,7 cm and reduce to 7,6 cm when we go to the north. Great Basin Desert has highest average annual rainfall which is up to 51 cm. Taklimakan desert has the lowest rainfall which swing from 1.0 cm in the east to 3.8 in the west.

Sparse rainfall, high temperature amplitude and harsh climate make the environment in the desert become an extreme habitat on the planet. This condition makes these large areas are free of vegetation. Only cactus and some particular species can live here.

Votes
Average: 5.9 (5 votes)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 194, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'has the highest'.
Suggestion: has the highest
... we go to the north. Great Basin Desert has highest average annual rainfall which is up to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1088.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 226.0 196.424390244 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81415929204 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46385896934 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 106.607317073 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610619469027 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 323.1 283.868780488 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.5773280799 43.030603864 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.9090909091 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5454545455 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.54545454545 5.23603664747 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0914590138978 0.215688989381 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0351762964182 0.103423049105 34% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0302276051445 0.0843802449381 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0542023194529 0.15604864568 35% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0300898254197 0.0819641961636 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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