The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists traveling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia's share of the Japanese tourist market.
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The Bar chart illustrates the number of tourist from Japan, who travelled abroad during period of 10 years, 1985 to 1995. The unit is measured in millions. At the same time, line graph represents the people who spent to Australia as tourist during same period.
Overall, it is clearly understood from the given information that over the time number of people who went to Australia as a tourist from Japan had increased with rise in total number of tourist from Japan.
During year of 1985, around 5 million people went abroad for vacation from Japan but at the same time no one went to Australia. Afterwards, there was linear increase in number of tourist and people who visited Australia up to year of 1995.Although, there was a rise of 1 million people in total number of tourist from Japan in year 1989 to 1990, and people who visited Australia during same time got fall down by 5%.
On the other, total number of tourist were reduced in 1991 by less than a half million but visitors to Australia were increased in same period by nearly one and half percent. After this, both the chart were steadily increased till 1995 with reaching all time high number of tourist by 15 million and visitors to Australia by around 6% of total during that year.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 240, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Although
...ho visited Australia up to year of 1995.Although, there was a rise of 1 million people i...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'as to']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.268595041322 0.268076937826 100% => OK
Verbs: 0.103305785124 0.116061578633 89% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0661157024793 0.0759168565197 87% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0330578512397 0.0366838410393 90% => OK
Pronouns: 0.00413223140496 0.0131127313244 32% => OK
Prepositions: 0.198347107438 0.155750635184 127% => OK
Participles: 0.0289256198347 0.0379272487307 76% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.36403674904 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0330578512397 0.0210936926555 157% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0743801652893 0.0948980150116 78% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0247933884298 0.00967000014798 256% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1257.0 1161.00487805 108% => OK
No of words: 222.0 196.9 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.66216216216 5.90752243213 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.73763899035 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.333333333333 0.337110787985 99% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.198198198198 0.247514529752 80% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.121621621622 0.171178102325 71% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0810810810811 0.112407865282 72% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36403674904 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.468468468468 0.546246751206 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 41.1354894968 49.3433353143 83% => OK
How many sentences: 8.0 8.93414634146 90% => OK
Sentence length: 27.75 23.0094962315 121% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.7032731122 42.9750493124 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.125 135.714022679 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.75 23.0094962315 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.25 0.689975730869 36% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.48048780488 68% => OK
Readability: 47.5698198198 47.7609492067 100% => OK
Elegance: 3.52941176471 2.94281807926 120% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267272248003 0.418131533498 64% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.210559044705 0.181151798455 116% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.103035345638 0.0850326197045 121% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.737597567563 0.706616315825 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.17948692175 0.157042692854 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166283728929 0.228904883108 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540365871041 0.108899403657 50% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.414496596412 0.367819155151 113% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0213722886377 0.0812612215331 26% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207223128518 0.316326947829 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0475637482116 0.0921553760075 52% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70731707317 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.14146341463 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.08536585366 49% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 3.16585365854 158% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 0.956097560976 105% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 3.02926829268 66% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 7.1512195122 112% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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