The pie charts reveal information about the proportion of time, which was passed by two different groups in six different activities in their leisure time/
Overall, almost half of youngsters engaged themselves in social networking sites and access music and movies, while 60-70 age group people kept themselves busy in health-related research activity and booking of movies and travel tickets.
To begin with, the younger one spent a quarter of their total time on social networking sites, while older people used one-fifth of the total. Furthermore, the percentage of the time, which was used by youngsters in access to movies and music was 21%, which changed in elder people, that is 15%. Moving further, the 60-70 age group people utilized 22% of their leisure time by doing health-related research, which was 2% more than youngsters.
In addition to this, both age group people shared the same proportion in making purchases, which is 12%. The younger one tends to spend more time playing games than older people, with 18% and only 5%, respectively. However, elder people passed their time making a booking of movies and travel tickets with 25%, which was fivefold to youngster's percentage.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 357, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... was fivefold to youngsters percentage.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, so, while, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1011.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 194.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21134020619 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62881038955 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546391752577 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 93.9124646701 43.030603864 218% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 144.428571429 112.824112599 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7142857143 22.9334400587 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.23603664747 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27248220617 0.215688989381 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132815351526 0.103423049105 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525873258815 0.0843802449381 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170043216314 0.15604864568 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0717530246272 0.0819641961636 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.2329268293 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 61.2550243902 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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