The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

Essay topics:

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

The presented pie charts depict information about how much water is used by various types of sectors classified into industrial, agricultural and domestic purposes in six regions throughout the world.

At first glance, it is immediately obvious that the largest proportion of water in North America and Europe is allocated for industrial purposes, whilst the most significant that of water in terms of the farming activities is consumed in rest of the areas.

When observing data in more detail, in Europe, just over 50% of water is dedicated to industry. Agriculture and domestic use come to the second and third place with 32% and 15%, respectively. Following a same trend, approximately half of water in North America is utilized in industry, remaining a 39 percent for agriculture and 13 percent for domestic requirement.

Turning to rest of description, in a stark contrast, agriculture has the pivot role to play in water consumption. The rest of the districts –namely Central, South America, Africa, and South East Asia more than 70 percent of water are dedicated to farming. In Africa, the contribution of consumed water for household purposes is responsible less than 10%, while that of water is two-fold greater in South East Asia.

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Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...is two-fold greater in South East Asia.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, third, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1060.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 202.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24752475248 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96751106971 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589108910891 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 327.6 283.868780488 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0346939551 43.030603864 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.5 112.824112599 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.25 22.9334400587 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227087072857 0.215688989381 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0918170717283 0.103423049105 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620110966265 0.0843802449381 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135766688341 0.15604864568 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0526108933312 0.0819641961636 64% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.2329268293 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.06136585366 119% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 40.7170731707 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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