The charts below show the popularity of different political parties in a country before and after the general election. The election was won by conservative party and they formed a government with the liberal democrats. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts illustrates the percentage of population carried by different political parties over different time period which is before and after the general election.
A quick glance at the chart reveals that conservatives and labour parties are the most popular among the counterfeits. A steep increase of popularity is seen in labour and undecided parties in a year in contrast to liberal party which had fallen down gradually over the same time period.
The clubbing of liberal Democrats and conservatives caused the latter to rise in it's fame of about 4 percentage. Where as the former popularity fall down from 19-10 percentage. Besides, after one year, downfall of fame is seen in both the parties, out of which conservative party lost 10 percentage of fame within six months difference thus making it to 35 percentage.
Where as, labor party's fame stood in second place by the time of general election that accounts 26 percentage of total fame. But, the dramatic stoop in it's percentage with 32 percentage is seen at the end of the year. More over, green party remained same 10 percentage before and after six months of election but lowered it's fame to half after twelve months. In contrast, undecided party which is an underdog before election increased its percentage 6 in the first half and doubled after a year with 20 percentage in total.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, second, thus, in contrast, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 33.7804878049 142% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1132.0 965.302439024 117% => OK
No of words: 228.0 196.424390244 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9649122807 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7287716986 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 106.607317073 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539473684211 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 359.1 283.868780488 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6973473868 43.030603864 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.2 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 5.23603664747 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266475943143 0.215688989381 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118484262774 0.103423049105 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0698508309348 0.0843802449381 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18657968404 0.15604864568 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0611863607779 0.0819641961636 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.