The charts below show the reasons why people travel to work by bicycle or by car.

Essay topics:

The charts below show the reasons why people travel to work by bicycle or by car.

The pie graphs give information about the reasons why people prefer to choose a bicycle or a car to work.

In general, it seems that the majority of people who like to cycle to work because they want to be healthy and the other reason is environmentally friendly. On the other hand, those who prefer to drive a car, since it's comfortable and distance from home to work.

The first pie chart shows that around a third is the highest percentage of people who think cycling is good for health as well as fitness. Similarly, 30% say that they go to work by bicycle because it's less pollution, 15% of no parking problems and 13% of no cost are the reasons why people prefer to cycle. Surprisingly, 11% of people say that use a bicycle is faster than driving.

The second pie chart illustrates that nearly a half of people to go work by car, as it's comfortable, the highest rate. 21% is the second reason they care about a distance to work. Both reasons 'faster than cycling' and 'need to carry things to work' constitute 14%. Finally, 11% of people say that driving is safer than cycling.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, second, similarly, so, third, well, in general, as well as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 891.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 198.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4605706073 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525252525253 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.3457012589 43.030603864 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.1 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.3 5.23603664747 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.390562225905 0.215688989381 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15325475886 0.103423049105 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0806204578752 0.0843802449381 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.258908114026 0.15604864568 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.073919440459 0.0819641961636 90% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 61.2550243902 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.82 11.4140731707 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.89 8.06136585366 85% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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