The charts below show the reasons why people travel to work by bicycle or by car.

Essay topics:

The charts below show the reasons why people travel to work by bicycle or by car.

The pie charts compare the percentage of the causes why people use a bicycle or a car to go to work. From the general perspective, the clear data could be observed that many people prefer to cycle to work because it's health and fitness as well as environmental friendliness, while comfort is the main reason that people like driving to work.

It is evident from the information provided that health and fitness, and less pollution make up the biggest proportion of cycling to work, in which each category account for 30%, followed by parking problems and no costs. Meanwhile, only 12% of people think this transport is faster than driving, it's also the lowest.

On the other hand, 40% is the highest percentage of people choose driving to work and the second highest is the distance to work at 21%. The next two reasons faster than cycling and carry things make up 28%, among that each reason account for 14%. Lastly, just only 11% of people vote for the reason that driving is safer than cycling.

Votes
Average: 8.9 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 298, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
... this transport is faster than driving, its also the lowest. On the other hand, ...
^^^
Line 5, column 67, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to drive'.
Suggestion: to drive
...the highest percentage of people choose driving to work and the second highest is the d...
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, lastly, second, so, well, while, as well as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 828.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 176.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70454545455 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38311467143 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607954545455 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.4311909996 43.030603864 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.285714286 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1428571429 22.9334400587 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.71428571429 5.23603664747 186% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283749437788 0.215688989381 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133045806149 0.103423049105 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109446454886 0.0843802449381 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187576610715 0.15604864568 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117778352151 0.0819641961636 144% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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