The charts below show the results of a survey about what people of different age groups say makes them most happy.
The given pie charts represent the factors making people the happiest in five broad categories, divided into people under 30 and people over 30.
As it can be seen, achievement at work seizes the majority in both charts, while having a good appearance and travelling replaced by financial security and being with family for people over 30.
Firstly, according to first pie chart (people under 30), achievement at work has the highest proportion with nearly one-third (31%), whilst all other factors following each other with close proximity in which doing hobbies is under a quarter (22%), having a good appearance with 18%, travelling with 15% and finally other factors takes the lowest percentage with 14.
Secondly, the figure in the second pie chart (people over 30) almost stays the same but only having a good appearance and travelling are replaced by financial security and being with family. The achievement at work keeps the first position with nearly a third (32%), doing hobbies showed a slight increase and became roughly a quarter (24%), financial security is at 20% and finally being with family and other factors make up 14% and 10% respectively.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 181, Rule ID: CLOSE_SCRUTINY[1]
Message: Use simply 'proximity'.
Suggestion: proximity
...other factors following each other with close proximity in which doing hobbies is under a quart...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, second, secondly, third, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 964.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 191.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04712041885 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4971132699 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544502617801 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 22.4926829268 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.026928499 43.030603864 174% => OK
Chars per sentence: 192.8 112.824112599 171% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.2 22.9334400587 167% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 5.23603664747 229% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0822131033124 0.215688989381 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.059473310296 0.103423049105 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432600456725 0.0843802449381 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0657416871752 0.15604864568 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.047323377843 0.0819641961636 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.5 13.2329268293 162% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.37 61.2550243902 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 10.3012195122 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.9970731707 156% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.0658536585 154% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.