The charts below show the results of a survey about what people of different age groups say makes them most happy.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Essay topics:

The charts below show the results of a survey about what people of different age groups say makes them most happy.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts elucidate the different contributing factors to make people happy between two age groups, those who are under 30 and over 30.
Both younger and older people, the highest percentage says that achievement at work brings them most happiness; 31% of people whose age is under 30 have responded as achievement at work is a leading factor to their happiness, whereas 32% of over 30 years old people have believed so. Meanwhile, doing hobbies is also important for both groups as which contributed as the second largest percentage making them happy.
It is interesting to note that, there is a major different factor leading to happiness is the appearance, travelling, financial security and family. While the young people under 30 years old is majorly dependent on appearances and travelling of 18% and 15%, respectively, which factors are not appeared in older age groups. In comparison, over 30 years old people are feeling happier with the financial security of 20% and being with family of 14%.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'whereas', 'while']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.252631578947 0.268076937826 94% => OK
Verbs: 0.152631578947 0.116061578633 132% => OK
Adjectives: 0.105263157895 0.0759168565197 139% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0368421052632 0.0366838410393 100% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0210526315789 0.0131127313244 161% => OK
Prepositions: 0.131578947368 0.155750635184 84% => OK
Participles: 0.0578947368421 0.0379272487307 153% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.75540208833 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0210526315789 0.0210936926555 100% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0631578947368 0.0948980150116 67% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0210526315789 0.00967000014798 218% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1012.0 1161.00487805 87% => OK
No of words: 167.0 196.9 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.05988023952 5.90752243213 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.73763899035 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.359281437126 0.337110787985 107% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.275449101796 0.247514529752 111% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.173652694611 0.171178102325 101% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.149700598802 0.112407865282 133% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75540208833 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616766467066 0.546246751206 113% => OK
Word variations: 56.7223968071 49.3433353143 115% => OK
How many sentences: 6.0 8.93414634146 67% => OK
Sentence length: 27.8333333333 23.0094962315 121% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.9920261602 42.9750493124 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 168.666666667 135.714022679 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8333333333 23.0094962315 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.16666666667 0.689975730869 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.84146341463 78% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.48048780488 0% => OK
Readability: 55.378243513 47.7609492067 116% => OK
Elegance: 2.1 2.94281807926 71% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313556040758 0.418131533498 75% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.153488536376 0.181151798455 85% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0547826405201 0.0850326197045 64% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.696349543295 0.706616315825 99% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.175699248788 0.157042692854 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.181993393059 0.228904883108 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632564668736 0.108899403657 58% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.259994039416 0.367819155151 71% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0527122903781 0.0812612215331 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.246420549567 0.316326947829 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409370581786 0.0921553760075 44% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70731707317 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.08536585366 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 6.0 3.16585365854 190% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 3.02926829268 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 6.0 7.1512195122 84% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.