The charts below show three types of police reports from the city of Johnstown in 2016, along with Johnstown’s average monthly temperature.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two charts depict thenumber of police reports filed in the year 2016 along with the average monthly temperature in Johnstown in Celcius . Overall, the number of traffic violations and noise complaints remain relatively steady through the year while theft reports see an increase in the hottest months of the year.
Traffic violations are pretty common throughout the year with the maximum count being 180 in the first quarter of the year and the minimum just under 150 in the third quarter. These violations are steady for the remainder of the year with around 170 and 155 in the second and fourth quarter of the year. On the other hand, theft reports are on the lower end through the year with the exception of the third quarter of the year. The lowest count of theft reports is around 20 between the months of January to March and highest is at 180 between July and September.
During the coldest months of the year between January and March, when the average temperature is between 5 and 12 degree Celsius, the number of traffic violations are at their highest while the theft reports are at their lowest. Interestingly, the opposite pattern can also be observed. Interestingly, during the hottest months of the year between July and September when the temperatures are between 18 and 25 degree Celsius, theft reports reach their peak and traffic violations are at their lowest. Noise complaints however, remain relatively steady throughout the year with counts averaging around 25, seemingly unaffected by the weather at the time.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, second, so, then, third, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 33.7804878049 151% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1286.0 965.302439024 133% => OK
No of words: 258.0 196.424390244 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98449612403 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51473201431 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.434108527132 0.547539520022 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 366.3 283.868780488 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4479278332 43.030603864 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.6 112.824112599 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8 22.9334400587 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1 5.23603664747 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.13902439024 615% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155679612935 0.215688989381 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0834851257666 0.103423049105 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102497754965 0.0843802449381 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139012653134 0.15604864568 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0831628268018 0.0819641961636 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.