The charts shows air pollution levels by different causes among four countries in 2021

Essay topics:

The charts shows air pollution levels by different causes among four countries in 2021.

Given this bar chart illustrates information about the reasons of air pollution which came from electricity generations,transport and industry , among four countries : America , China , Japan, Australia

Overall, it is clear that , much pollution are produced by China , especially from Industrial companies. However , America's transportation relieze much more gases into the air than others apart from China

To start with , China's most pollution from industry with 80 PPM while vehicles are producing 70 PPM.In comparison, pollution from electricity generations are the lowest with 59 PPM . Although, this number is the higest comared to other three countris

When it comes to America , industrial and electiricity generations make gases almost the same figure with 30 PPM while transportation was the biggest by 58 PPM . In Japan, electricity generations is the lowest cause with 15 PPM . In contrst , it can be seen that Australia is the cleanest country among the others . All causes are figured by almost the same number 19 PPM

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Average: 5.9 (23 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, while, apart from, to start with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 849.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 158.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37341772152 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01580120066 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601265822785 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 8.94146341463 11% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 158.0 22.4926829268 702% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 43.030603864 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 849.0 112.824112599 752% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 158.0 22.9334400587 689% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 45.0 5.23603664747 859% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 1.69756097561 825% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167410031145 0.215688989381 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.167410031145 0.103423049105 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0843802449381 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113499502676 0.15604864568 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0730722556276 0.0819641961636 89% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 82.9 13.2329268293 626% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -88.89 61.2550243902 -145% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.51609756098 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 64.9 10.3012195122 630% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.05 11.4140731707 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 15.37 8.06136585366 191% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 63.0 11.4329268293 551% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 65.2 10.9970731707 593% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 65.0 11.0658536585 587% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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