The charts shows air pollution levels by different causes among four countries in 2021 Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

Essay topics:

The charts shows air pollution levels by different causes among four countries in 2021.

Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart illustrates the levels of air pollution due to various reasons (Electricity Generation, Transport, and Industry) in four countries such as China, America, Japan, and Australia during 2021. The units used to indicate air pollution are PPM.

Overall, China is contributing the high amount of air pollution in all three factors whereas Australia is showing considerably low levels of air pollution in all three aspects. Moreover, Japan is creating less pollution with the Electricity Generation.

Furthermore, Industries are releasing most of the air pollutants in China recorded as around 80 PPM followed by Japan around just above 40 PPM. Approximately 70 PPM of the polluting elements are released into the atmosphere in China by transport. Consequently, America stands at second position with around 58 PPM and then Japan with 30 PPM. The highest record of just below 60 PPM is reported in China due to the Electricity generation and then America with just above 30 PPM, Australia has just below 20 PPM, and Japan around 15 PPM.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, furthermore, moreover, second, so, then, whereas, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 879.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20118343195 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91699772706 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556213017751 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.3994381993 43.030603864 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.875 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.125 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 5.23603664747 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131600240492 0.215688989381 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0727946123885 0.103423049105 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635098340784 0.0843802449381 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129299152828 0.15604864568 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0748678075288 0.0819641961636 91% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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