The climograph below shows average monthly temperatures and rainfall in the city of Kolkata.

Essay topics:

The climograph below shows average monthly temperatures and rainfall in the city of Kolkata.

The given climograph illustrates the information regarding changes on rainfall and temperature in Kolkata over a period of year.
It can be clearly seen that, highest temperature was recorded in the month of July whereas the average rainfall was more than 200 mm throughout the period.
As a matter of fact, in January temperature of Kolkata started nearly from minus 16 degree Celsius and there was a gradual increased on this trend up to a May where it was recorded at 0 degree Celsius. Similarly, temperature of June was recorded more than twice as much than it had in May and this trend was still increased in July and reached up to a peak at about 35 degree Celsius. After reaching a peak at 35 degree in the following month the temperature was decreased by half in October and stabilized at the lowest degree of minus 18 degree Celsius at the end of year.
On the other hand, rainfall in Kolkata started from just below the 250 mm in January and there was an upward trend in terms of rainfall for next four months where it had recorded at about 300 mm. moreover, there was the a continuous decrease on this trend and almost stabilized with its initial month at the end of the year.

Votes
Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 28, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ', the highest'.
Suggestion: , the highest
...d of year. It can be clearly seen that, highest temperature was recorded in the month o...
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Line 3, column 271, Rule ID: AS_ADJ_AS[1]
Message: Comparison is written "as much 'as'".
Suggestion: as
...ne was recorded more than twice as much than it had in May and this trend was still ...
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Line 4, column 217, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'a' is left.
Suggestion: the; a
...ed at about 300 mm. moreover, there was the a continuous decrease on this trend and a...
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
may, moreover, regarding, similarly, still, whereas, as a matter of fact, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 980.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 215.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55813953488 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55881597822 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.474418604651 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 299.7 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 28.8429951175 43.030603864 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.0 112.824112599 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.7142857143 22.9334400587 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0 5.23603664747 248% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202017210483 0.215688989381 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112848853895 0.103423049105 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0754145043368 0.0843802449381 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159694300646 0.15604864568 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0611521169317 0.0819641961636 75% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.95 61.2550243902 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.76 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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