Deaths in Someland 1990 and medical research funding in Someland
The presented bar chart illustrates the number of people died of AIDS, leprosy, tropical diseases, diarrhoea, malaria and TB in Someland 1990. Meanwhile, the other shows the amount of money spent on medical research in Someland at the same time.
It can be seen clearly that the highest funding was paid out for AIDS while the number of deaths of TB was the most.
In Someland 1990, the people died of TB reached over 1.5 millions, which approximately fourth as high as that of diarrhoea and seventh as high as deaths for leprosy. In addition, the number of victims who could not recover from malaria, tropical diseases and AIDS were around 0.5 millions.
Althought most of people died of TB, the research’s expenditure for TB were lowest, just 25 millions in 1990; whereas that of for AIDS received over 150 millions. Research funding in leprosy and tropical diseases stayed at the second with approximately 100 millions, followed by diarrhoea and malaria respectively 60 millions and 50 millions.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 11, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...DS were around 0.5 millions. Althought most of people died of TB, the research's expendi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
second, so, whereas, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 844.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 167.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05389221557 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74788324846 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580838323353 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 234.0 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.1503748988 43.030603864 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.571428571 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8571428571 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57142857143 5.23603664747 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261224633408 0.215688989381 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118775658706 0.103423049105 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0793949176325 0.0843802449381 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154285308208 0.15604864568 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0821516996354 0.0819641961636 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.2329268293 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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