The diagram below show how instant noodles are manufactured

Essay topics:

The diagram below show how instant noodles are manufactured.

The presented diagram illustrates the production of instant noodles from flour to sealed products.
Overall, manufacturing has eight basic steps, which start from delivering flour to the storage silos and finish as prepared cups of noodles with noticeable labels.
It is observed that instant noodles consist of flour, water and oil, which are mixed together. The following stage implies that getting substance rolls and creates dough sheets. Next step is that sheets are cut on strips, which are formed into noodles disks. These products are cooked in the special place with usage of oil, and consequently disks have to be dried.
The next part of manufacturing is preparing the cooked products for further transportation. There are special cups, where noodles discs are put into. They are filled next stage by vegetables and spices. Hence, these cups have to be labeled and sealed. Finally, prepared cups of instant noodles ready for transportation and consumption.

Votes
Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, hence

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 818.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 153.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34640522876 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68201720433 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627450980392 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 238.5 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.2387196371 43.030603864 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.3636363636 112.824112599 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9090909091 22.9334400587 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.54545454545 5.23603664747 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201818774315 0.215688989381 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0738581292401 0.103423049105 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0697716555247 0.0843802449381 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134756632868 0.15604864568 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519951077242 0.0819641961636 63% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.2329268293 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 61.2550243902 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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