The diagram illustrates the processes in which salmon eggs evolves to become adults salmon fish. The transformation is in three stages and happens in the aquatic region.
Overall, the salmon life cycle involves three steps which are the formation of a fry followed by molt and finally, a mature salmon fish.
The first level of salmon fish species is the production of salmon eggs, this occurs in the upper river which is characterized by slow movement of the water surrounded by reeds plants, its roots constitutes of small stones that enhances a favourable environment for salmon eggs which hatches into a fry, this takes place approximately 5 to 6 months. Furthermore, this fry which measures about 3 to 8cm flows into the lower river that is fast flowing, this surrounding aids it's development into a smolt which is larger in size (12 to 15 cm) and completes in 4 years.
Lastly, formation of adult salmon takes up to 5 years in the open sea dramatically enlarges (70 to 76 cm), tripling it's previous size. These big salmons finally swims back to it's slow moving upper river to deposit their eggs in order to commence another cycle.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 196, Rule ID: CONSTITUTES_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'consists of'?
Suggestion: consists of
...r surrounded by reeds plants, its roots constitutes of small stones that enhances a favourable...
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Line 5, column 512, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: larger
...s its development into a smolt which is larger in size 12 to 15 cm and completes in 4 years. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, furthermore, if, lastly
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 946.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 196.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82653061224 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69277574871 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612244897959 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 281.7 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.9759525762 43.030603864 202% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 135.142857143 112.824112599 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 22.9334400587 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57142857143 5.23603664747 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12156290091 0.215688989381 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0639654147051 0.103423049105 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062247467532 0.0843802449381 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0921334892016 0.15604864568 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0473911234554 0.0819641961636 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 61.2550243902 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.3012195122 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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