The diagram below show the typical stages of consumer goods manufacturing, including the process by which information is fed back to earlier stages to enable adjustment.Write a report for a university lecture describing the process shown.

Essay topics:

The diagram below show the typical stages of consumer goods manufacturing, including the process by which information is fed back to earlier stages to enable adjustment.
Write a report for a university lecture describing the process shown.

The diagram illustrates the process of manufacturing products in firm to the sales in markets.

As can be seen from the diagram that, manufacturing firm has storage room, in which they can save raw materials. Later on, raw materials forwards for production with judicious design, if, raw materials not seem good for processing then, send it to storage. Now, raw goods passes from assemble, inspection and testing, respectively. In testing stage, company employer test product with design, then it has been reject and send it for against processing.

Albeit, packaging product proceed to dispatch and sales. Sales product checks in market, and gives feedback to packaging section. After all these stage has been finished products are ready for advertising in the world.

All in all, the diagram evident that, various firm produces a product, after so many testing stages. Companies accept our valuable feedback and then reproduce products as our acceptation.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...cts in firm to the sales in markets. As can be seen from the diagram that, ma...
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... and send it for against processing. Albeit, packaging product proceed to dis...
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...re ready for advertising in the world. All in all, the diagram evi...
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Discourse Markers used:
['if', 'so', 'then', 'after all']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.293785310734 0.268076937826 110% => OK
Verbs: 0.135593220339 0.116061578633 117% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0677966101695 0.0759168565197 89% => OK
Adverbs: 0.045197740113 0.0366838410393 123% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0338983050847 0.0131127313244 259% => OK
Prepositions: 0.146892655367 0.155750635184 94% => OK
Participles: 0.0508474576271 0.0379272487307 134% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.73449795354 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0225988700565 0.0210936926555 107% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0564971751412 0.0948980150116 60% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0112994350282 0.00437022459523 259% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00564971751412 0.00967000014798 58% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1015.0 1161.00487805 87% => OK
No of words: 151.0 196.9 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.72185430464 5.90752243213 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.73763899035 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.41059602649 0.337110787985 122% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.364238410596 0.247514529752 147% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.23178807947 0.171178102325 135% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.12582781457 0.112407865282 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73449795354 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64238410596 0.546246751206 118% => OK
Word variations: 59.3528038325 49.3433353143 120% => OK
How many sentences: 10.0 8.93414634146 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.1 23.0094962315 66% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.1497411994 42.9750493124 56% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.5 135.714022679 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1 23.0094962315 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.4 0.689975730869 58% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.48048780488 203% => OK
Readability: 51.5238410596 47.7609492067 108% => OK
Elegance: 2.28947368421 2.94281807926 78% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219143974676 0.418131533498 52% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.147754479408 0.181151798455 82% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.118310974941 0.0850326197045 139% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.583242381493 0.706616315825 83% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.163521099712 0.157042692854 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0923938514872 0.228904883108 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105098563817 0.108899403657 97% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.160852230884 0.367819155151 44% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0247720921469 0.0812612215331 30% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16993796823 0.316326947829 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121792823498 0.0921553760075 132% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70731707317 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.14146341463 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.08536585366 98% => OK
Positive topic words: 2.0 3.16585365854 63% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 0.956097560976 209% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 3.02926829268 99% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 7.1512195122 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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