The diagram below shows an automatic photo booth. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The provided picture depicts the information pertaining how an automated photo booth function. Overall, the whole process consists of nine disparate steps, initiating with the insertion of coin to start the machine and terminating with the delivery of photo outside the booth.
Prima facie, it is lucid that primarily, the coin is inserted in the coin-receiver located outside the booth to commence the procedure. Thereafter, four buttons are located just below the coin slot to select the size as well as colour. The upper buttons allow the user to imprint the picture either in 1 large format or in 4 passport sized images, whilst the lower buttons grant two options regarding the shade of picture, coloured or in monochrome, albeit the passport sized pictures are suggested to be in colour.
Once these steps are done, the user moves inside the booth where, first of all, a stool is arranged at the surface of the booth which can be adjusted according to convenience. In addition, a mirror is present inside the booth at the top, which can be used to check the appearance, while beside this, a bulb attached with string is located. An eye level, further, is situated in the central position at which the user has to concentrate on to get their portrait captured. Finally, a curtain is hung in the entrance which must be closed before photos is clicked.
At the culminating stage, to capture the picture, the operator has to pull the string of bulb which flashes after 3 seconds and image is taken which, subsequently, is delivered outside in the chamber within a minute.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 325, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'passport' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'passports'.
Suggestion: passports
...icture either in 1 large format or in 4 passport sized images, whilst the lower buttons ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, regarding, second, well, while, as to, in addition, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 7.0 243% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1313.0 965.302439024 136% => OK
No of words: 268.0 196.424390244 136% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89925373134 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62585578875 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 106.607317073 146% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582089552239 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 283.868780488 146% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 11.0 4.33902439024 254% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.976223111 43.030603864 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.3 112.824112599 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8 22.9334400587 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.7 5.23603664747 185% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129863786196 0.215688989381 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0557263886618 0.103423049105 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404778228207 0.0843802449381 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0717427196349 0.15604864568 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428046063323 0.0819641961636 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 40.7170731707 182% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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