The diagram below shows the average hours of unpaid work per week done by people in different categories. (Unpaid work refers to such activities as childcare in the home, housework and gardening.)
Describe the information presented below, comparing results for men and women in the categories shown. Suggest reasons for what you see.
The given bar chart gives information about how many hours each women and men in various categories do the household chores every week
Overall, it is clear that married women with or without children spend more hours doing unpaid work than men do. In addition, married women with 3 or more children work harder than the other married women.
It can be seen from the chart that married women who have to take care for 3 or more offsprings work for the longest hours , for about 60 hours, followed by above 50 hours are done by married women with 1 to 2 children . The figure for married women with no children is the lowest, at about 30 hours.
Married men who had no and 1 to 2 offsprings share the equal number of hours doing household chores( for approximately 20 hours). Unlike women, married men with 3 or more children spend less time on household duty compared to the other men.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 123, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...re offsprings work for the longest hours , for about 60 hours, followed by above 5...
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Line 5, column 219, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ne by married women with 1 to 2 children . The figure for married women with no ch...
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Line 6, column 21, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...t about 30 hours. Married men who had no and 1 to 2 offsprings share the equal n...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 728.0 965.302439024 75% => OK
No of words: 161.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52173913043 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27182809773 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552795031056 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 212.4 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.0042733638 43.030603864 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.333333333 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8333333333 22.9334400587 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.83333333333 5.23603664747 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115877299969 0.215688989381 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0641900192397 0.103423049105 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440521569299 0.0843802449381 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.079477348562 0.15604864568 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0226724503729 0.0819641961636 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.47 61.2550243902 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 11.4140731707 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.89 8.06136585366 85% => OK
difficult_words: 20.0 40.7170731707 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 11.4329268293 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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