The diagram below shows how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology collects up-to-the-minute information on the weather in order to produce reliable forecasts.

Essay topics:

The diagram below shows how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology collects up-to-the-minute information on the weather in order to produce reliable forecasts.

Given is the diagram illustrating the process of delivering the weather forecasts.

It is clear that there are four main stages of production. We can see that weather information is collected, analyzed, prepared and finally showed.

The procedure of producing broadcast begins with the collection of the information. In this step, there are three ways to acquire information including satellite, radar, and drifting buoy. After incoming data, it turns into the analysis and forecasting stage, which is aided by the picture, radar screen or synoptic chart.

On the third stage, document is prepared on the computer before going to the last part. Finally, the news of the weather is broadcasted on media like television, radio and recorded announcement.

Votes
Average: 6 (2 votes)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, third

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 33.7804878049 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 645.0 965.302439024 67% => OK
No of words: 118.0 196.424390244 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46610169492 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.29587325169 3.73543355544 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91221017659 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 82.0 106.607317073 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.694915254237 0.547539520022 127% => OK
syllable_count: 196.2 283.868780488 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.6030185895 43.030603864 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.625 112.824112599 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.75 22.9334400587 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.25 5.23603664747 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1363808328 0.215688989381 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0555801513929 0.103423049105 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573578274977 0.0843802449381 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0845511758078 0.15604864568 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0517135386695 0.0819641961636 63% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.85 11.4140731707 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.06136585366 120% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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