The diagram below shows how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology collects up-to-the-minute information on the weather in order to produce reliable forecasts.

Essay topics:

The diagram below shows how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology collects up-to-the-minute information on the weather in order to produce reliable forecasts.

The diagram illustrates the process of collection of the geological data by the Australian Bureau of Meteorology for updated weather forecast with certainty.

Overall, the data collected from inside and outside the globe by using modern equipment and technologies, and It is analyzed using the computers to display results.

Firstly, the information inputs from the satellite, radar, and drifting body, where they are placed on different location like the sea, terrestrial station, and in the space. Through satellite different pictures are captured, the radar screen generates the data by using satellite picture and radar. The synoptic chart is generated by using information from all three medium.

Finally, the output from the satellite picture, radar screen, and synoptic chart are analyzed for displaying. The final data from all three sources are compiled using the computer and prepared it to broadcast. Those results from it are exposed to the TV, newspaper and played through the recorded announcement.

Votes
Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 867.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 155.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5935483871 4.92477711251 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7786161297 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58064516129 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.5475408935 43.030603864 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.375 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.375 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.875 5.23603664747 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0897217508995 0.215688989381 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0434995069599 0.103423049105 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0770408160422 0.0843802449381 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0767361168208 0.15604864568 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0965899397827 0.0819641961636 118% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 61.2550243902 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 11.4140731707 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.28 8.06136585366 128% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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