The diagram below shows how a central heating system in a house works.
Given is the diagram illustrating the process of a domestic heating system.
It is clear that there are three main stages of the system. Firstly, cold water is put into the house.
At the initial stage of the process, the cold water enters the house and is stored in the water tank in the roof of the house. It continues with water being gone down the boiler which includes gas or oil.
The process is followed by a step called "circulation of hot water to radiators and taps" where hot water is pumped and flowed into the radiators, located in the different rooms. After that, water circulates through the radiators, which have small tubes inside them to help distribute the heat, and this warms each of the rooms. At the final stage, water is directed to the taps to provide hot water for the house.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 676.0 965.302439024 70% => OK
No of words: 145.0 196.424390244 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66206896552 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47010008196 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43726518732 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 106.607317073 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579310344828 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 204.3 283.868780488 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.428540522 43.030603864 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.125 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.875 5.23603664747 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.079834254888 0.215688989381 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0504326129701 0.103423049105 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0755240581163 0.0843802449381 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0849845812474 0.15604864568 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0879420626366 0.0819641961636 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 11.4140731707 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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