The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station Summarise the information by selecting and reporting main features and make comparisons where relevant

The picture illustrates how a hydroelectric power station works and generates electricity.
In general, hydroelectric power station is a reversible process that involves several stages from water in a river to electrical energy in the national grid.
At the beginning of the process, water in the river is kept in a high-level reservoir by a dam which can be opened or closed by time. At day, when an intake is opened, water in the high-level reservoir flows downward and rotates turbines in the power station located in lower-level position. In the subsequent step, reversible turbines in forward direction operate a generator which produces electricity leading by power line to the national grid. On the other hand, water after rotating turbines flows to a low-level reservoir to be stored for a reversing process.
Following that, at night, water in the low-level reservoir flows in a backward direction to the power station. The reversible turbines in the station take responsibility to pump water upstream into the high-level reservoir when the intake is closed.

Votes
Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

Transition Words or Phrases used:
in general, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 900.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 171.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26315789474 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02243585507 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514619883041 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 292.5 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.1540358253 43.030603864 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 112.5 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.375 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.625 5.23603664747 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127770194278 0.215688989381 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0777060613198 0.103423049105 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0755632440212 0.0843802449381 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123632632639 0.15604864568 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0751126385761 0.0819641961636 92% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 61.2550243902 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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