The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram below provides information about the way electricity is produced in a hydroelectric power plant.
Overall, as we can see from diagram, the process of water is consisted of 4 main stages including holding the water, transition of water to power station, generating electricity and transportation of water via power lines which has different procedure in day and night.
In the first stage, the water from river is flowing to the high-level reservoir which gathers the water behind the dam. After that, depend on the time, there is a intake below the dam which is open at day and closed at nights. Subsequently, if it is the daylight time, the water is flowed to the plant to produce electricity, whereas it has a reverse direction in the night. In the night, it is pumped by turbines to high-level reservoir. The next step is generation of electricity in generator with the help of turbines which are multi-functional and reversible, and like previous step, it depends on time as well. In the day, these turbines act like generator, and generates electricity energy, while in the night, they pumps water from low-level reservoir to high-level reservoir. Finally, the produced energy is transported by power lines to electricity consumers such as city dwellers or other plants.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 162, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...fter that, depend on the time, there is a intake below the dam which is open at d...
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Line 5, column 723, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'pump'
Suggestion: pump
...ricity energy, while in the night, they pumps water from low-level reservoir to high-...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, well, whereas, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1083.0 965.302439024 112% => OK
No of words: 213.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08450704225 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98957463217 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553990610329 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 341.1 283.868780488 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.3342257849 43.030603864 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.333333333 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 22.9334400587 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.44444444444 5.23603664747 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157017342644 0.215688989381 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0707337860238 0.103423049105 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0822592943504 0.0843802449381 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160059634187 0.15604864568 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0810151980932 0.0819641961636 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.2329268293 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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