The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram provides information about producing electricity by utilizing geothermal energy.
Briefly, geothermal energy utilize the heat of the inner layer of the Earth`s to warm up the cold water to produce steam. Consecutively, this steam could be used to fuel the turbine and after that generator which is called steam generator. Finally, generator converts mechanical energy to electrical one.
Firstly, cold water from a source is introduced into system and pumped down into injected well where placed 4.5 km from the surface. In the second stage, the cold water passes through a warm up zoon which causes increasing in the temperature of water. This passage from hot zoon, bring water into near its boiling point but still remains almost liquid. The hot liquid, in the third stage, coming back to the surface by a pump and enters into a condenser. The condenser is already contained water which its temperature would be increased by hot water which was produced in the second section.
At the final stage, steam which was produced in the condenser is introduced into turbine and results in circulation of fans in the turbine. After that, energy of this circulation is transported into a generator by a shaft. At the end of fifth stage, electricity will be provided by the generator.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
briefly, but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, so, still, third, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1086.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 214.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07476635514 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72381409896 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53738317757 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 342.0 283.868780488 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.1706893204 43.030603864 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.5 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8333333333 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.08333333333 5.23603664747 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111721425992 0.215688989381 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0527019618995 0.103423049105 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065599650461 0.0843802449381 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108953508453 0.15604864568 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0849034050663 0.0819641961636 104% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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