The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

Essay topics:

The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The given draft represents the various step of generating power via geothermal energy plant.

To begin with, the first step of generating geothermal plant was to collect cold water from different resources in reservoir. This reserved cold water pumped down to injection well through pipeline, which is 4.5 km depth include in second process. Similarly, in third process, the collected cold water in well passes to the production well through geothermal zone. This geothermal zone also called hot rocks and the main feature of this hot rocks was to rise the temperature of cold water as needed and send to production well. After this, the well pumped-up hot water via pipeline and collect into condenses.

Furthermore, the condenses produce steam and transfer to turbine, which is only operate by steam power. In same stage, the turbine helps to operate generator and this operation was the final stage of producing electricity. Afterward, the produced electricity is transfer to mainline via power line and the process repeat again.

Overall, the figure depicts the five steps of producing power in geothermal power plant, which includes collecting cold water as first step and generator producing electricity with the help of turbine in final step.

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Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 315, Rule ID: REPEAT_AGAIN[1]
Message: Use simply 'repeat'.
Suggestion: repeat
...mainline via power line and the process repeat again. Overall, the figure depicts the fiv...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, second, similarly, so, third, well, as to, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1061.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 200.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.305 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62483809024 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 322.2 283.868780488 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8077437505 43.030603864 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.1 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 5.23603664747 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0965318660015 0.215688989381 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0432127138411 0.103423049105 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.030026476686 0.0843802449381 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0687549274673 0.15604864568 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.014239130239 0.0819641961636 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.2329268293 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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