The Diagram Below Shows How Geothermal Energy Is Used to Produce Electricity

Essay topics:

The Diagram Below Shows How Geothermal Energy Is Used to Produce Electricity

The diagram illustrates information about a green power plant which convert underground heat energy into electricity.

Overall, the water is a primary part of the which transfer heat from underground to power plant changing his shape in to steam. Five major steps involve in this process. Turbine is a main component which covert heat energy into mechanical energy.

The picture shows that the process start with cold water, which dropped in a 4. 5 Km long tunnel. After that it pumped into pours of earth with high pressure to absorb heat energy in it. However it goes through hot rocks, mud and sand. Other side of plant it collect in to well, where pump move in condenser that convert in Steam with significant high pressure chamber. At last stage this steam will go into turbine. The Turbine drive with steam pressure which makes mechanical energy. Lastly, the mechanical force power to generator which in to electricity that transfer in house with help electric poll.

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 99, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...which dropped in a 4. 5 Km long tunnel. After that it pumped into pours of earth with...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 188, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...h pressure to absorb heat energy in it. However it goes through hot rocks, mud and sand...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 260, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'collects'?
Suggestion: collects
...s, mud and sand. Other side of plant it collect in to well, where pump move in condense...
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, lastly, so, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 3.15609756098 349% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 815.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 164.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96951219512 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42945531409 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609756097561 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.2892507807 43.030603864 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.9166666667 112.824112599 60% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6666666667 22.9334400587 60% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.41666666667 5.23603664747 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0839588128422 0.215688989381 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0301942288181 0.103423049105 29% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0381601494477 0.0843802449381 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0650947543552 0.15604864568 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0284369501607 0.0819641961636 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.2329268293 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 61.2550243902 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.95 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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