The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Several phases in the procedure of producing instant noodles are depicted in the process diagram.
From an overall prospect, the method consists of eight stages. In addition, the process commences when flour is stored in silos and finishes with the labelling and sealing step.
From a quick glance at the diagram, initially, flour is transmitted in silos. Following this, a combination of flour, water and oil is blended by a mixer prior to being kneaded into thin dough sheets. In the next step, these manufactured dough sheets are separated into numerous strips . Having been transformed into noodles dics, these raw materials are deeply fried in cooking oil and dried .
Moving on to analyse the remaining stages of the instant noodles making process, once the previous outcomes have been fried, they are put in different units- cups- alongside the addition of vegetables and spices. Ultimately, each dried noodles cup is labelled and sealed.
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...heets are separated into numerous strips . Having been transformed into noodles di...
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...re deeply fried in cooking oil and dried . Moving on to analyse the remaining sta...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 797.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 152.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24342105263 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58448900242 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.684210526316 0.547539520022 125% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.5552721079 43.030603864 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.5555555556 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8888888889 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.66666666667 5.23603664747 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109103807702 0.215688989381 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0432889268133 0.103423049105 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432102142908 0.0843802449381 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0706058324983 0.15604864568 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519529185507 0.0819641961636 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.06136585366 121% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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