The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured

Essay topics:

The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured

The diagram given is a pictorial representation of how instant noodles are made. Overall, the production process consists of eight different steps from the transportation of flour, which is the primary raw material, to the final packaging of sealing and labelling.

The first stage is the transportation of flour from storage silos to the mixer where water and oil are added to convert the flour to dough. The dough produced are then rolled into dough sheets using the rollers. Subsequently, the dough sheets are converted into strips which are then placed in the noodle discs.

Next, the noodle is cooked with oil and dried up. The dried noodles are packaged in cups while adding vegetables and spices before the final stage of sealing and labelling the outcome of the whole process. In general, the process of manufacturing instant noodles requires a combination of flour, the main ingredient, and other additives including water, oil, spices and vegetables at different stages using various techniques such as mixing, rolling and cooking.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, then, while, in general, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 882.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 168.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74935572746 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.1151308195 43.030603864 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.25 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.375 5.23603664747 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170220790954 0.215688989381 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0856801693076 0.103423049105 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114801029172 0.0843802449381 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115639344813 0.15604864568 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0660825226739 0.0819641961636 81% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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