The diagram illustrates the production steps of sugar which is making from sugar cane.
Overall, this process is comprised of 7 different steps which begin with the growth of the sugar canes and end with the drying and cooling of sugar.
Firstly, sugar canes grow for between 12 to 18 months to be harvested. So, in the second step, canes can be harvesting with two different ways. One of them is using agricultural trucks and the other one is harvesting by hand. After that, harvested canes crush with a device for acquire the juice of these canes.
In the fourth step, the juice is purifying by limestone filter with the aim of achieve the pure juice of sugar canes. Next step is the formation of syrup from juice with evaporator. Sixth step of this process is centrifugate the syrup and thus, sugar crystals can be separated from syrup. In the last step, sugar put in a can for drying and cooling.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: comprises; consists of; is composed of
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 751.0 965.302439024 78% => OK
No of words: 161.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66459627329 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38431664378 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 106.607317073 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521739130435 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 223.2 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.0952102885 43.030603864 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.1 112.824112599 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1 22.9334400587 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 5.23603664747 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338115877397 0.215688989381 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151637724483 0.103423049105 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.129340993389 0.0843802449381 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.260814565448 0.15604864568 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.126313847043 0.0819641961636 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.2329268293 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 11.4140731707 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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