The diagram below shows the multistage production of pears as canned fruits. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the process below.
The given picture illustrates the information about process of manufacturing of pears as packed fruits.
Overall, it is clear that it is quite complex procedure including many stages. It can be seen that process begin with picking raw pears and ends at distributing to customers as a final product.
To begin with, pears are collected as raw material and then transported for further processing. Before, checking quality the pears are washed to remove dust. In the next step the pears which are of good quality, stored in fridge. Afterwards, the the pears are weighted and graded. Next, in peeling process the other covering of Pears is removed.
Probing further, peeled pears are cored and sliced. In the next step, sliced pears are sealed and packed in cans. Cooking is stage comes after sealing in which pears are sterilized. Afterthat, canned pears are labelled and stored. In the eventual stage, these are sent to supermarket as a final products for selling to Ultimate consumers.
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The given picture illustrates the information abou...
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...ll, it is clear that it is quite complex procedure including many stages. It c...
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...lear that it is quite complex procedure including many stages. It can be seen ...
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...t is quite complex procedure including many stages. It can be seen that proces...
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...uite complex procedure including many stages. It can be seen that process beg...
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...any stages. It can be seen that process begin with picking raw pears and ends ...
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...ages. It can be seen that process begin with picking raw pears and ends at dist...
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...t process begin with picking raw pears and ends at distributing to customers as...
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...d ends at distributing to customers as a final product. To begin with, pears...
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...at distributing to customers as a final product. To begin with, pears are c...
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...l product. To begin with, pears are collected as raw material and then tran...
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... To begin with, pears are collected as raw material and then transported for fu...
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...hen transported for further processing. Before, checking quality the pears are washe...
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...sing. Before, checking quality the pears are washed to remove dust. In the next...
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... Before, checking quality the pears are washed to remove dust. In the next step...
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... checking quality the pears are washed to remove dust. In the next step the pe...
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...washed to remove dust. In the next step the pears which are of good quality, sto...
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... quality, stored in fridge. Afterwards, the the pears are weighted and graded. Next, in...
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... quality, stored in fridge. Afterwards, the the pears are weighted and graded. Next, in...
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...aded. Next, in peeling process the other covering of Pears is removed. Probin...
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...e next step, sliced pears are sealed and packed in cans. Cooking is stage comes ...
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...e sealed and packed in cans. Cooking is stage comes after sealing in which pears...
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...stage comes after sealing in which pears are sterilized. Afterthat, canned pears...
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...Afterthat, canned pears are labelled and stored. In the eventual stage, these a...
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...re labelled and stored. In the eventual stage, these are sent to supermarket as...
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...d stored. In the eventual stage, these are sent to supermarket as a final produ...
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...ese are sent to supermarket as a final products for selling to Ultimate consumers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, then, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 832.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10429447853 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61055740677 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60736196319 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 22.4926829268 53% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.7918287029 43.030603864 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 64.0 112.824112599 57% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.5384615385 22.9334400587 55% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.84615384615 5.23603664747 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 1.69756097561 1591% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.09268292683 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200806234305 0.215688989381 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.072721186561 0.103423049105 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0388278342221 0.0843802449381 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125351379624 0.15604864568 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00897235133584 0.0819641961636 11% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.2329268293 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.41 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.9970731707 62% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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