The diagram below shows the multistage production of pears as canned fruits. Write a report for a university lecturer the process below.
The given picture illustrates the information about process of manufacturing the pears as packed fruits.
Overall, it is clear that it is complex process including 14 steps. The process begins from picking pears by hand and ends at distributing to customers.
In the first stage, the pears are picked by hands and transported for washing these pears. Before storing in cooled place the quality of pears is checked. Afterthat, pears are weighted and graded with the help of a machine.
Probing further, after graded the pears are peeled and cored. In the next step, the material which remained after cored, is packed in cans. Afterwards, canned pears are sealed and sterilized on high temperature for some time. In the 12th step, labelling of cans are made. Next to it, cans are stored before sending these in supermarket. Eventually, the canned pears are distributed to ultimate consumers.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...iven picture illustrates the information about process of manufacturing the pears...
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...4 steps. The process begins from picking pears by hand and ends at distributing t...
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...ears by hand and ends at distributing to customers. In the first stage, the p...
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...ears are picked by hands and transported for washing these pears. Before storing...
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...d transported for washing these pears. Before storing in cooled place the quality of ...
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...rther, after graded the pears are peeled and cored. In the next step, the materia...
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...ng these in supermarket. Eventually, the canned pears are distributed to ultimat...
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...permarket. Eventually, the canned pears are distributed to ultimate consumers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 753.0 965.302439024 78% => OK
No of words: 146.0 196.424390244 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15753424658 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47606760199 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68196824177 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616438356164 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 225.0 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 22.4926829268 53% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 15.3758468601 43.030603864 36% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 62.75 112.824112599 56% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.1666666667 22.9334400587 53% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.16666666667 5.23603664747 22% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19544947242 0.215688989381 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0704448983001 0.103423049105 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0380613094102 0.0843802449381 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115330488413 0.15604864568 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0183459848225 0.0819641961636 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.2329268293 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.76 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.9970731707 62% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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