The diagram below shows the process of recycling glass bottles

Essay topics:

The diagram below shows the process of recycling glass bottles

The diagram illustrates how glass bottles are recycled.
As it can be seen in the diagram that, in the first stage, used bottles are collected at the collection point. Then, it is transported by trucks to the cleaning plant for next stage. The second stage begins with the process of cleaning all glassed under high-pressure water and then, they are categorized in three types such as brown, green and clear bottle. After that, the separated bottles are moved to the recycling plant where all bottles broken down into small pieces. The process continues with the burning these pieces under high temperature in furnaces to produce liquid. Then the recycled glass liquid and the new liquid glass are shaped in a glass mould to make new bottles.
At the final stage, these new bottles are used to contain products and shipped to supermarkets for consumptions.
Clearly, the whole process consists three stages, from collecting waste glass bottles to delivering products in new glasses to retail stores, such as supermarkets.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, second, then, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 859.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 168.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1130952381 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58000526244 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595238095238 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.9406231869 43.030603864 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4444444444 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.11111111111 5.23603664747 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31877461759 0.215688989381 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130988900452 0.103423049105 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0883653670559 0.0843802449381 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204818511155 0.15604864568 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0930085569819 0.0819641961636 113% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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