The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

Essay topics:

The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The process diagram below indicates the plastic bottle recycling stages. From the general perspective, it is apparent that there are 9 steps in total, from releasing bottles in the right place to making new items from the discharged bottles.
Initially, the first stage begins whenever there is a used bottle that was put into the recycled rubbish container. Afterwards, a truck will collect those containers if they are fulfilled with bottles. Once the collecting step is finished, staff will divide used bottles into two different boxes, one is available to be recycled, another is the out of order bottles. This is also the last stage that witnesses a human's appearance and needs a person who directly touches the discharged bottles.
Lately, all six final steps are done automatically. Before being crushed into small pieces and washed in a huge pool, the selected bottles will be compressed into big square blocks. By this step, bottles pieces will be poured into a machine that produces plastic pellets, then heating them to form raw material. The raw material made from plastic bottles is processed to produce daily products, such as tote bags, clothes or pencils.

Votes
Average: 9.2 (2 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 13, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'diagrams'.
Suggestion: diagrams
The process diagram below indicates the plastic bottle recy...
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Line 3, column 345, Rule ID: OUT_OF_PLACE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'out-of-order'?
Suggestion: out-of-order
...vailable to be recycled, another is the out of order bottles. This is also the last stage th...
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Line 3, column 412, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'humans'' or 'human's'?
Suggestion: humans'; human's
...is also the last stage that witnesses a humans appearance and needs a person who direc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, then, as to, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 984.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 192.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.125 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55594945258 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 106.607317073 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.547539520022 122% => OK
syllable_count: 302.4 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.4880261497 43.030603864 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1 5.23603664747 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152406943071 0.215688989381 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713554842005 0.103423049105 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0980238431411 0.0843802449381 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114005747833 0.15604864568 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.065226645827 0.0819641961636 80% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.2329268293 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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