The diagram below shows the production of electricity using a system called Ocean Thermal Energy Conversion (OTEC).
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.
The given diagram highlights various stages involved in the power production with the Ocean Thermal Energy Conversion.
Overall, it is a complicated process, which requires special machinery. In addition, drinking water is obtained as a side product of this process.
Before the process begins, the Sun warms the upper part of the natural water tank with salted water. Before entering the system, the water is warmed to 29 degrees on the top, in comparison of 5 degrees on the depth of 1 kilometer. Then, using separate pipes on different levels, hot and cold seawater is transported to the evacuated evaporation chamber and the condensing chamber, respectively. In the first chamber, warm water is separated to vape, that moves turbines and creates energy, and salt that is then moved to the condensing chamber, where it is mixed with cold water from outside. The vape, after moving a turbine, goes to the internals of condensing chamber, where the rest of the water cools it, producing pure water.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, then, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 841.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 165.0 196.424390244 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09696969697 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68510156821 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618181818182 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.298107896 43.030603864 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.125 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.625 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0609301384372 0.215688989381 28% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.033203761736 0.103423049105 32% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545699618756 0.0843802449381 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0715573509108 0.15604864568 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0712401076436 0.0819641961636 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.89 8.06136585366 123% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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