The diagram below shows the production of ethanol oil from grain Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

Essay topics:

The diagram below shows the production of ethanol oil from grain. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The picture illustrates the process of producing ethanol oil from grain.

Overall, the manufacturing process of ethanol oil to feed market consists of 8 main stages starting with grain storage and ending with dry distiller grain. Also, there are 7 main steps in the production of ethanol oil to the fuel market.

Looking at the ethanol oil production process in detail, after being stored in the storage, the grain is put in the milling. The resulting grain is then cooked and put in a liquefaction machine to make it a liquid. Next, the liquid is passed into the fermentation to make chemical changes.

At the sixth stage in the process, the liquid is passed through the distillation and becomes solids or fuel ethanol. If it turns into fuel ethanol, it is stored in tanks and delivered to fuel market. Otherwise, the resulting solids (wet distiller grain) is put into a dryer so that the water is removed leaving the dry distillers grain for feed market.

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Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 318, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'distillers'' or 'distiller's'?
Suggestion: distillers'; distiller's
...at the water is removed leaving the dry distillers grain for feed market.
^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, still, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 799.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 165.0 196.424390244 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84242424242 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62303142329 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 106.607317073 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521212121212 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 240.3 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.5824124395 43.030603864 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.7777777778 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.44444444444 5.23603664747 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213004646179 0.215688989381 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106414149189 0.103423049105 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0664026626064 0.0843802449381 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158673673036 0.15604864568 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0584606863731 0.0819641961636 71% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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