The diagram below shows the recycling process of plastics Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

Essay topics:

The diagram below shows the recycling process of plastics.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram illustrates the process of plastic recycling.
Overall, it is clear that there are six main steps in this process, beginning with the buying, using and discarding of new plastic products and ending with newly plastic products entering the market again.
In the first stage of the process, the first step takes place in a shop where people are bought and used it. The bags and rubbish are brought into the house. The next step of the process involves decomposing and are transported to a landfill.
While the bags and rubbish are taking it into the house, the bottles are collected into the house, the bottles are collected in the factory. At this point, the bottles are delivered to a sorting house in which they are removed any impurities and are sorted by color. Following this, people are transported of the bottles into the car. After that, the bottles are then brought into the processing. Finally, it is packaged and delivered to shops, ready for sale.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ing and are transported to a landfill. While the bags and rubbish are taking it...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, so, then, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 807.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 167.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83233532934 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41387933397 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526946107784 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 247.5 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.8247797646 43.030603864 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.7 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7 22.9334400587 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.1 5.23603664747 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100059818465 0.215688989381 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0436841381091 0.103423049105 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.06657808069 0.0843802449381 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0975037164192 0.15604864568 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0764086590856 0.0819641961636 93% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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