The diagram below shows the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.
The mentioned diagrams illustrate the different phases and tools used in the manufacture of cement as well as way in which cement is used to generate concrete for construction purposes.
Overall, as is represented by the diagrams the cement production is a bit quite long process which involves more than five stages whereas generation of concrete is short process with only three steps as compared to cement generation.
Firstly, in cement generation limestone and clay is crushed together in a crusher which produces powder as its output. Secondly , the powder is passed in the mixer then it is further supplied in the rotating heater where the powder is heated. Thirdly, the output from heater is grinded in the grinder which produces cement as a result. Finally, at last stage cement is packed on bags.
To begin with cement production, in the beginning, the small percentage of cement (15%) and water (10%) is supplied to concrete mixer. In addition to this, 25% of sand and 50% of gravel is further added to concrete mixer. Finally, ingredients are mixed and as a result concrete is produced .
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 128, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... produces powder as its output. Secondly , the powder is passed in the mixer then ...
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Line 7, column 286, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...xed and as a result concrete is produced .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, then, third, thirdly, well, whereas, in addition, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 923.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 184.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01630434783 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68624124208 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565217391304 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 281.7 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.5997784104 43.030603864 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.555555556 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4444444444 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.0 5.23603664747 286% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.366812936677 0.215688989381 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139694675282 0.103423049105 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103986954191 0.0843802449381 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22679554545 0.15604864568 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0916805148471 0.0819641961636 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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