The diagram below shows the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.
The given diagrams present the process of cement production and then cement using in concrete production.
In the first diagram, limestone and clay are minimized in the small particle as powder through crusher at the same time, which is not entirely homogeneous material. Then this powder is better blended in mixer which flows all mixed mass pass pipe to rotating heater. In this stage, mixed powder is heated along rotated tunnel and sent to conveyor. Amount of powder is transformed to be cement by a grinder, combined with a rolling which set at the terminus of conveyer. Finally, cement is packed in bags.
The second diagram shows that cement can be used to produce concrete. This process is simpler than cement production, only poured four elements in the concrete mixer which rotate along production. We can see that concrete is a mixture of cement 15%, water 10%, sand 25% and small stones, namely gravel, 50%. Lastly, concrete is ready to use after several complicated processes.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, lastly, second, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 831.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 165.0 196.424390244 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03636363636 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47407865627 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.5942191703 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.1 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 5.23603664747 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304011417864 0.215688989381 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132776887065 0.103423049105 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124808196328 0.0843802449381 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.255880192093 0.15604864568 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.130012807612 0.0819641961636 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.2329268293 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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