Given diagram describes how water cycle works;the uninterrupted movement of water on and under earth as well as atmosphere.
Overall the process takes place in three areas; in peripheral water sources,underground and atmosphere. Firstly’ water stored in sea and other areas exposed to sunlight; as a result the water evaporated in to the atmosphere. About 90 percent of water evaporated are coming from oceans’ as it is the largest water body in the earth. Eventually those water vapores turns to clouds, similarly some vapors forms mist in high altitudes and over mountains. In second stage those clouds condensed and rains to distribute water in different parts of the earth.
Finally, the water received over earths surface, are distributed to different water bodies and most of the water return back to the sea by rivers and other ducts. Some amount of water drained to the ground and forms ground water which helps plants to grow. The cycle continues With the three stage process.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 7.0 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 33.7804878049 18% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 167.0 965.302439024 17% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 30.0 196.424390244 15% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56666666667 4.92477711251 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.34034731932 3.73543355544 63% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89539864843 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 26.0 106.607317073 24% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.866666666667 0.547539520022 158% => OK
syllable_count: 52.2 283.868780488 18% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 8.94146341463 22% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 5.5 43.030603864 13% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.5 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 22.9334400587 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.0 5.23603664747 0% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221136105191 0.215688989381 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151671098051 0.103423049105 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0740937479513 0.0843802449381 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151671098051 0.15604864568 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0740937479513 0.0819641961636 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.2329268293 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 61.2550243902 78% => OK
smog_index: 0.0 6.51609756098 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.43 11.4140731707 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.7 8.06136585366 133% => OK
difficult_words: 12.0 40.7170731707 29% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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