The diagram gives information about the process of making carbonated drinks

Essay topics:

The diagram gives information about the process of making carbonated drinks.

The given figure provides information about how to make carbonated beverages.

From an overall perspective, it is evident that the project of manufacturing soda drinks is a linear process that consists of 5 principal steps, beginning with purifying water and culminating with packaging.

According to the data in the image, the process commences with a stage called "water cleaning" in which raw water is moved to these machines. In this stage, the pieces of equipment have functions such as filtering, softening water, and mixing them with chemical ingredients. Next, the water is pumped through the chain and partaken in the heating evaporation and carbonation part. The water is heated by electricity and goes through the cooling pipe that refreshes its temperature. In the same section, the cool water continues to be delivered to the machine carbonating it.

Moving to the third step, the carbonated water will travel through the long pipe and be participated in the mixing tank. During this stage, the water is flavored with color and syrup, a flavor that makes the final product become more attractive and impressive to the customers. Subsequently, the work-in-process items are filtered again and filled into bottles or cans. Finally, the manufacturer packages these final items and gives them to the transportation service which delivers them to the retailers and supermarkets.

Votes
Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, so, third, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1187.0 965.302439024 123% => OK
No of words: 219.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4200913242 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04665117127 2.65546596893 115% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 106.607317073 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616438356164 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 369.0 283.868780488 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 11.0 4.33902439024 254% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.5963011273 43.030603864 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.909090909 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9090909091 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.81818181818 5.23603664747 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184937430728 0.215688989381 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0684626056736 0.103423049105 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.080300758763 0.0843802449381 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13855631116 0.15604864568 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100955828572 0.0819641961636 123% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 61.2550243902 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 11.4140731707 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.91 8.06136585366 123% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 40.7170731707 182% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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