The diagram illustrates how bees produce honey.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given diagram provides information regarding the natural process of making honey using bees. It consists of seven main stages.
In the first step of this process, the bees start building a hive. This is a container packed with individual cells which serve as a living place for them. Subsequently, the bees leave the hive to search for proper flowers. However, only the core of those plants is afterwards used for honey as it contains a sweet liquid called nectar. Once finished the collection of nectar, the bees return to the hive and deposit the liquid in cells. Then bees cool the substance down using their wings in a backwards and forwards continuously movement. The final step of this process is the evaporation of water. When the nectar completely lost its water counterpart, the honey has finally been produced. All it remains is to storage the outcome for better preservation. For this, recipients such as jars are often used.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, regarding, then, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 16.0 33.7804878049 47% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 785.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 159.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93710691824 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61197929191 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.660377358491 0.547539520022 121% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.2103903936 43.030603864 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 65.4166666667 112.824112599 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.25 22.9334400587 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.08333333333 5.23603664747 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115054821129 0.215688989381 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0413945974366 0.103423049105 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473667072957 0.0843802449381 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128463259038 0.15604864568 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0659226221997 0.0819641961636 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 13.2329268293 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 61.2550243902 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.48 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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