The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram demonstrates the process of producing bricks for the building industry.
There are six phases in manufacturing bricks, which is a building material, from raw clay to the final products.
Initially, a huge amount of clay is exploited from underground by a digger. After that, the clay is filtered through a metal grid to get rid of residue then it go through on a roller to the the stage of turning it into bricks. The clay is shaped either by a wire cutter, which is a more productive way, or by using moulds.
The next step of the process is drying the wet bricks completely by putting them in a drying oven for 24 to 48 hours. Following that, the bricks are brought to a kiln and heated. After being hardened, firstly, they are baked at moderate temperature, which is at 200°C to 980°C then at high temperature, which is from 870°C to 1300°C. Having completed all these steps, the bricks are moved to the cooling chamber and stay there for 48 to 72 hours to cool down and be usable. The final stage is packaging and the deliver the products to customers.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 187, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...sidue then it go through on a roller to the the stage of turning it into bricks. The cl...
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Line 5, column 187, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...sidue then it go through on a roller to the the stage of turning it into bricks. The cl...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 508, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...sable. The final stage is packaging and the deliver the products to customers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 888.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 194.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57731958763 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59107668606 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567010309278 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.9211178425 43.030603864 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.8 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.23603664747 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141733625025 0.215688989381 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.064310400545 0.103423049105 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0966036054736 0.0843802449381 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126307784625 0.15604864568 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124412699452 0.0819641961636 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.2329268293 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 61.2550243902 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 11.4140731707 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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