The diagram illustrates the various stages of life of honey bees.
The given picture describes the the information about different phases involved in metamorphosis of a insect called honey bees.
Overall, it is clear that life cycle of bees takes approximately 34 - 36 days to complete. The metamorphosis process encompasses mainly 5 steps to attain majority.
To begin with, the female adult lays 1-2 Eggs for every three days. The eggs are of oval shape and hatch in nearby half a month. Next to it., nymph shed off extra feathers and skin before becoming young adults bees. They moults skin three times. Firstly within five days after hatching eggs then, in following week and last time 9 days after that.
Moving further, nymph become young adult bees after the moulting phase and they grow in length. For attaining majority stage, it takes merely four days. Eventually, they enter in majority stage and become reproductive adults which are ready to hatch the egg for the next generation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...month. Next to it., nymph shed off extra feathers and skin before becoming young ...
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...before becoming young adults bees. They moults skin three times. Firstly within five ...
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...s. They moults skin three times. Firstly within five days after hatching eggs th...
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...ly within five days after hatching eggs then, in following week and last time 9...
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...tching eggs then, in following week and last time 9 days after that. Moving ...
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...which are ready to hatch the egg for the next generation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, then, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 779.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 155.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02580645161 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47282236065 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.683870967742 0.547539520022 125% => OK
syllable_count: 234.0 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.1462541715 43.030603864 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.8181818182 112.824112599 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0909090909 22.9334400587 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.54545454545 5.23603664747 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0953237956078 0.215688989381 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.032821813222 0.103423049105 32% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0395492434766 0.0843802449381 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0623093479421 0.15604864568 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350740051024 0.0819641961636 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 61.2550243902 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.3 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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