The diagram illustrates the various stages of life of honey bees.
The diagram illustrates the growth stages in the life cycle of a honey bee. In general, the complete progress takes between 34 and 36 days. Also, there are five main stages in the growth of the honey bee to become a mature adult honey bee from egg.
The beginning of the life cycle of the honey bee is when the female adult bee lays eggs. Usually, it lays one or two eggs every three days. The egg hatches after between 9 and 10 days later. In this time, the immature honey bee ,or nymph, appears.
The nymph, during the third stage, moults 3 times as it grows to change its size and skin. The first moulting progress takes place on the fifth day after hatched, the second is 7 days later and the third after the next 9 days. After its last moulting stage, the young adult honey bee emerges and takes 4 days next to completely become a mature honey bee.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 228, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, so, third, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 696.0 965.302439024 72% => OK
No of words: 162.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.2962962963 4.92477711251 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.93905779448 2.65546596893 73% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543209876543 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 209.7 283.868780488 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.4883027657 43.030603864 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.6 112.824112599 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2 22.9334400587 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 5.23603664747 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217932543024 0.215688989381 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105572632593 0.103423049105 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.145503837384 0.0843802449381 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166244383376 0.15604864568 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10040798816 0.0819641961636 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 13.2329268293 52% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 61.2550243902 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.3012195122 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.36 11.4140731707 64% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.77 8.06136585366 84% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 40.7170731707 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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