The diagram shows how chocolate is produced. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The given diagram illustrates a breakdown of liquid chocolate manufacture into different stages.
Overall, there are ten steps in the making of liquid chocolate, commencing with harvesting cacao beans and concluding with liquid chocolate being produced.
The process starts with the gathering of ripe cacao beans, whose colors tend towards noticeably red, directly from the trunk of cacao trees native to South America, Africa and Indonesia. Upon being collected, the peel is removed, leaving white cocoa beans for fermentation. After that, those fermented beans are dehydrated by sun-drying before being packed into large sacks, ready for delivery by trucks or lorries.
In the factory, the beans undergo a roasting process at around 350 degree Celsius, after which they are moved to a crushing machine to separate the outer shell and the inner part called the nibs. While the husks are removed for another purpose, the nibs go through a double-roller press granulator, and the resulting product is chocolate liqueur.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 863.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 159.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42767295597 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62046121459 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.698113207547 0.547539520022 128% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1704020392 43.030603864 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.285714286 112.824112599 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7142857143 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.85714285714 5.23603664747 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0530241166416 0.215688989381 25% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0261820923577 0.103423049105 25% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0339009180965 0.0843802449381 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0429264574325 0.15604864568 28% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0348194147524 0.0819641961636 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.2329268293 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 61.2550243902 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.3012195122 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 11.4140731707 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.69 8.06136585366 120% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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