The diagram shows how electricity is generated by a hydroelectric dam.
Write a 150-word report for a university lecturer explaining how the process works.
The given diagram illustrates the overall process of generating the hydroelectricity.The entire process seems to be a complex way and time consuming.
First,huge volume of water is stored in a massive reservoir. After that, it is released under high pressure with in a compacted small hole like structure called pen stock,where water passes through and reaches the turbine for the further process of electricity generation.
However, after reaching the water into turbine the main process starts here.Water which was brought into an enormous pressure moves the turbine and consequently electric...
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and its distributed towards long distances
and it is distributed towards long distances
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Always put a space after punctuation marks. Essay e-rater is sensitive.
Need to polish sentences.
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Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.647 4.0
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