The diagram shows the sequences of purifying sea water into drinkable water.
First of all, the saltwater which is taken from the sea flows into pre-treatment filter where the water is forced through membrane at high pressure to the next filter and the backwash of filter returns to the sea. In this process, salt and other impurities are separated from the molecules of water. On the other hand, sea water concentrated returns to the sea.
At the next stage of process, the purified water inters the post-treatment filter with lime, chlorine and fluoride. Then it saves in storage to integrate water supply system.
In general, saltwater changes to drinkable water in three simple steps.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, then, in general, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 586.0 965.302439024 61% => OK
No of words: 114.0 196.424390244 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14035087719 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.26757987692 3.73543355544 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59548344596 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 66.0 106.607317073 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578947368421 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 173.7 283.868780488 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.5088393961 43.030603864 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.7142857143 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2857142857 22.9334400587 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.57142857143 5.23603664747 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187374065949 0.215688989381 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0960792189505 0.103423049105 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589545930911 0.0843802449381 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115188033659 0.15604864568 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0728017425398 0.0819641961636 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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